On Jazz, Robotics, and Revisions ๐โ๏ธ๐
Plus BTS of my school visit + join me on Tome? ๐
Hello,
I hope that youโre keeping well. Last week I had so much fun being the guest author for the fifth graders at Fellows Elementary! We had an excellent discussion about creating characters that make readers feel seen and writing with empathy. The students asked fantastic questions, too.
After the presentation, I spent the rest of the day running around Ames with my mom. We went to Cornbread for lunch, then we visited Dog-Eared Books and Cook's Emporium. I loved spending time with Mom and having an afternoon off.




Once upon a time, I was in both Robotics and jazz band. (I was also in Art Club, Writerโs Ink, marching band, and concert band, but thatโs a story for another time.) Iโve always had a need to improvise and experiment. (Iโve always said Iโd try just about anything once for science. It usually pays off, or at least I have an interesting story to tell after the fact. ๐) Lately Iโve been thinking about how those experiences have influenced my writing process, especially as Iโm working on revisions.
In jazz band, we played from sheet music, but there was always wiggle room for improvising. The key provided the structure, so even if someone were playing a solo, theyโd have guidelines for what notes would sound right within the framework of the song. When Iโm plotting, I plan out my major story events and characters, but thereโs room for me to improvise. If my character gives me a more compelling idea, Iโll do it.
During my time in Robotics, I primarily worked on the electrical systems of the robot. This often meant a lot of waiting around on the mechanical team to build a functional chassis and drive train so that our electronics had somewhere to go. (When I got bored of waiting, I learned how to help build the base, too.)
Sometimes, weโd build a prototype robot out of whatever material was available in the shop. One year, we used an old orange crate as our mockup. It looked ridiculous with all of the components stuck on this crate with wheels, but it worked! We were able to test out different configurations while waiting on the mechanical team. By the time the robotโs metal body was built, we had time to make the electronics shine and even add flourishes like neon lights. (Hooray for being extra! ๐)
The orange crate prototype reminds me so much of why having multiple drafts is important. My first drafts may not look like the finished book, but I need to write the first draft, get through the ugly phase and test out my plots. During edits, Iโll refine the process until eventually the story works and I can add style.
Since the school visit last week, Iโve been deeply entrenched in revisions for my WIP. Itโs going well, but Iโm at the point where Iโm anxious to have my rewrites done and hand the book off to beta readers. Iโm not quite there yet! It has been fun shaping this novel into the story itโs meant to be. I canโt wait to share more soon!
In other news, I decided to try Tome, a brand new app devoted to fantasy books (and all the various subgenres of fantasy.) It went live on Tuesday.
Though I havenโt been able to spend much time on there yet beyond creating my profile, the chaotic energy in my feed has been fun! Itโs been a mix of book reviews, fan art, and memes, along with readers and authors connecting. You can find me on Tome here. You can learn more about the app by visiting their Discord server here.
Tome for Android (itโs just a browser for now.)

Upcoming Virtual Events
This week there are a couple of fun steampunk events happening virtually that Iโm planning on attending:
Third Annual Tippy Golden Teacup Awards on Friday, Jan 31st at 8:30 pm Central time, hosted by Madame Askew and the Grand Arbiter. I listened in last year and had fun. Itโs sort of like Oscars for people in the steampunk community, but with more heart and whimsy.
Tea Time Treats hosted by the BrassGears Adventurers Society on Sunday, Feb 2nd at 2 pm Central time. Susanna Davenport will be teaching us via Zoom how to bake scones and participants can bake along with her virtually. I love cooking, but I donโt bake often (itโs much harder to improvise.) Iโm excited to learn!
Happy reading!
Kelsey